The Eggs in Ellesmera

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OOC: Aseku, have you read this thread in it's entirety? Your post to this thread makes no sense at all. Also, if you're going to be attacking and killing a creature like an urgal, it would be helpful for readers to know exactly why your character is doing so. Remember, Urgals aren't the enemies any more, not since book three. And this RPG takes place sixteen years after the war with Galbatorix. Make sure you've read the current plot and all the rules and helpful boards.

[aseku]

Ok ok, but i like action in my writing and this is a bad urgal. And shes attacking it cause it stole a special necklace from her which she got from her father. Its a bad urgal not the good ones, its on that evil Shade's side. And i have read the rules so please don't offend me like that ok. I am VERY quick to anger so don't take me lightly and no offence here but that comment is an offence to me and i am rising to anger. Not that i will but do NOT take me lightly. Ok?

Aseku grabbed her sword suddenly being able to move. She swung with such force the urgal fell back yowling in pain and grabbing his chest. The wound wasn't deep but Aseku didn't care. She raised her sword high and paused as the urgal cowarded in fear. "Next time..." She leaned forward and yanked a beautiful necklace ( www.myimportstore.com/store/images/Accessories/FF12SaveCrystalNecklace.jpg ) with a blue crystal on it off the urgal's neck. "Don't take my stuff." She sent the end of her sword down onto the urgal's head. (Not the sword the other end) The urgal groaned in pain and then blacked out. Aseku withdrew her sword and put the necklace other her head and around her neck. She held the crystal in the palm of her hand and then sighed. "I hate urgals." She mummbled and let go of the crystal. It dangled around her neck. Aseku then turned and started to walk back toward her house.

When she neared her home, a young elf ran out to greet her. "Aseku!" She wrapped her arms around Aseku's waist. "I was so scared when that urgal broke into the den and ruined everything!" She cried. Aseku patted her head and then glanced at the house. A broken window and a few scattered stuff was the only damage. "Dam-" The elf put a finger to her lip. "Don't say naughty words!" She scolded.(its ok to say that word right? i read in teh rules ok) Aseku bit her lip. "Fine if it makes you happy." She stroked the elf's silver hair. "You should go inside and see if anything else has been stolen." Aseku murrmered. "Ok Akira?" The elf nodded. "Sure." She said and then stepped away. Aseku followed Akira. When they entered the room Aseku sighed. The table had been toppled over and papers were scattered. Ink was spilled on the floor and Akira's diary layed beside her teddy bear, which now had no arm. "Kepto!" Akira cried and picked up the bear along with its arm. "I'll fix you up." She promised. Aseku picked up Akira's diary and set in on the table. Akira hummed a song while she tried to knit Kepto back together. Aseku then began to put the books that had fallen back in the bookshelf"So what happened to the urgal?" Akira asked suddenly. Aseku flinted. "I, scared it off." Aseku replied picking up another book and putting it next to the last one. Akira sat down in a chair. "Where did it go?" She asked. Aseku looked out the window. "I don't know." She awnsered and then noticed the sun was falling. "Well, get to bed." She stood up and led the way toward their room. Akira layed down in her bed and curled up in the blanklets. "Can you tell me the story of Eragon?" Her little sister asked. Aseku nodded and then began the tale of the great dragon rider Eragon. Once she had finished Akira had closed her eyes and her breathing grew slower as she drifted off into sleep. "I...want...to..become..a..dragon...rider...too.." Akira whispered before she was asleep. Aseku layed down on her bed and closed her eyes. She let sleep overpower her after an hour.

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OOC: Aseku, I meant no offence. I'm only trying to help you. Your posts in this thread still don't make sense. I would suggest making a new thread in which your character deals with the urgal. If you would have read this thread, you would realize it has moved past Du Weldenvarden and into New Doru Arabea. This makes me think that you haven't read all the rules and helpful boards. With that said, you should know never to take me lightly. I take offence when my helpful words are unnecessarily marked as rude. I'm the admin. It's my job to tell people what they're doing wrong. And you're doing it wrong. Take my advice and everything will run smoothly.

[aseku]

oh, well now i get your point. Ok sorry i wasn't in the mood at that time, or a happy mood that is heh heh.... ok well the thing about the hole new thread thing is i am kinda embarresed.... but u have a point and to be honest i thought this was the elf city...or..well.......heh heh