Andurn

[zarzo2]

username:zarzo2

name:Andurn (from water adurna)

age:14

attitude:
creative perseverance

Race: elf

appearance:
dirty blond hair agile body fair slightly tanned skin blue eyes

allegiance:
dragon riders

Weapons:
rider sword (blue called adurna) and bow

Other Info:
he is an orphan father and mother killed after the war by a few evil urgals raiding when he was 10

History:
As a young boy he grew up in the elven forest and learned the way of the elf. Then he moved to algesia.Then when his father and mother were killed when he was 10. then he ran into the forest by his small village during the raid to hide when he saw a blue egg. then when it hatched and became Celestia he journeyed to Eragon to learn. He learned magic and dragon riding and found a riders sword that fit him with the name Adurna. When the shade uprising began he and his Friends came to help in the battle.

Role Play Sample:
Andrun charged at the warriors in front of him. He sliced at the warriors but they kept coming from all sides."Celestia" he yelled to her with his mind. Then he whispered "flauga" seeing the figure in the sky. He flew up and landed on his dragons then with a final word "brishingar" he cast a fireball at his enemies. Then feeling exhausted from the magic and the battle he fainted while Celestia flew him home.

Dragon name: Celestia

dragon color: Sapphire blue

personality:decisive and creative like the owner

age: 4 years

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As an elf this character is extremely young! 14 in an elf is like 5 in a human. Please up the age a little bit. I'm only saying this because he's a rider. If he weren't a rider, I wouldn't have a problem with the age. His history makes him out to be much older. You say, "As a young boy he grew up..." I think at 14 he's still just a young boy. If you could just up the age a little, I would gladly accept the app. Also, there are currently no eggs out in the wilderness to be found in this story line. All of the eggs are in New Doru Arabea, or with egg carriers. That will need to be adjusted too. Thank you

[zarzo2]

username:zarzo2

name:Andurn (from water adurna)

age:48

attitude:
creative perseverance

Race: elf

appearance:
dirty blond hair agile body fair slightly tanned skin blue eyes

allegiance:
dragon riders

Weapons:
rider sword (blue called adurna) and bow

Other Info:
he is an orphan father and mother killed after the war by a few evil urgals raiding when he was 10

History:
As a young boy he grew up in the elven forest and learned the way of the elf. Then he moved to algesia.Then when his father and mother were killed when he was 10. then he ran into the forest by his small village during the raid to hide when he saw a a young dragon rider who sent him to Eragon and gave him a blue egg, then when it hatched and became Celestia he went to Eragon to learn. He learned magic and dragon riding and found a riders sword that fit him with the name Adurna. When the shade uprising began he and his Friends came to help in the battle.

Role Play Sample:
Andrun charged at the warriors in front of him. He sliced at the warriors but they kept coming from all sides."Celestia" he yelled to her with his mind. Then he whispered "flauga" seeing the figure in the sky. He flew up and landed on his dragons then with a final word "brishingar" he cast a fireball at his enemies. Then feeling exhausted from the magic and the battle he fainted while Celestia flew him home.

Dragon name: Celestia

dragon color: Sapphire blue

personality:decisive and creative like the owner

age: 5 years

sorry i forgot about elf human age difference

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Thanks for modifying your app!

ACCEPTED!!!