Guerra

[kiarawoolfe]

Not so sure on this, but I hope wild dragons are okay...
Your username: KiaraWoolfe

Character's name: Guerra

Character's age: 12

Character's attitude: Hardcore, niave, annoying, typical adolescent male.

Character's Race: Wild Dragon

Character's appearance: Dark purple, almost black scales. Triceratops-like crest at the back of head. Violet, bright eyes.

Character's allegiance: Dragon Riders, although he is wild

Weapons: Claws, teeth, flame, the usual. But he has sharp kife-like appendages on the edges of his wings.

Other Info: He has wished forever to have a rider, and is secretly sad that he wasnt chosen.

History: Grew up in the mountains, had a usual life, until he flew to Du Weldenvarden, curious. He got mixed up in the war from there. He now flys with the riders into battle and the like.

Role Play Sample: Guerra swooped to the tree-tops, the purple dragon swiping off the top leaves as he rose again. Taking to the sky, he thought about the riders. Why wasn't he chosen? He was a strong Dragon, they must have overlooked his egg.
Guerra roled to the side as another dive-bombed him.
They wrestled in the sky, playing for the enjoyment of the young elves watching on.

[Trinn]

I like the application, and I think it may be nice to have a wild dragon actually in play. I'm just not sure if a wild dragon would ever truly desire to have a rider. Wild dragon's don't think the same way that humans and the like do. In the Inheritance cycle, it had been mentioned that when dragons took part of the bond, they became more sophisticated and learned to use speech. I think wild dragons communicate in their own special way, which Paolini never really specified.

I think you need a lot more in your history, as well. It's too short.

Let me talk to my co-admins and see what they have to say about it.

[Trinn]

Alright, I spoke to my co-admins and we all agreed that we do like this character app. There are just a few things we're worried about. First, we all agree that the history needs to be much more in depth of this wild dragon. Where did his egg come from? Who were his "parents" in the dragon world. Secondly, his personality needs to be expanded upon. Why does he want to be bonded to a rider? What drives him to join the war? Lastly, we want to know how this dragon came to learn human speech. It is not a dragon's native tongue, nor am I sure that they have the capabilities of learning human language at all if the dragon is not bonded. Also, Max brought up this interesting point. Oromis gave a lesson saying that most wild dragons viewed bonded dragons as second class and only a few were ever rewarded to mate with them. If that's the case, this dragon could be outcast from his wild companions. We're willing to accept this character, you just have to put a little more work into it.

[kiarawoolfe]

Thnx, I will