Nathaneil

[Nathaniel & Thadrin]

My username:Captain Boltz

Character's name:Nathaniel

Character's age:13

Character's attitude:can be very stubborn

Character's Race:Elf/Human

Character's appearance: Male Boy with Blue Eyes Dirty Blonde Hair and Wears either a Aqua Marine Tunic or Robe

Character's allegiance:Dragon Riders

Weapons: Vanyali sverd

Other Info: Has a pet hawk named Arget Fethrblaka

History: he was born in Du Weldenvarden .His Mother was a Elf Noble and His  father was  a merchant. His Family decided to move East to Form a Village. When He Turned 12 Eragon  heard about the Village and went there to see if a egg would hatch for them. A white Egg Hatched for him and He Named it Quicksilver because it scales where pure silver.Eragon Took Them to a Guild as the Dragon Guild where Dragon Riders go to train.After a years hard work he had obtained his riders sword. He soon Began to write the Ancient language and spells in a tome.Now he has past his training and he is now a dragon rider

Role Play Sample: Nathaniel looked down at the old Dragon Guild Below Him as he prepared to leave for his quest to greatness.He Had packed everything for his journey.He ha Decided to go west to restore the Dragon Riders old halls in Alagaesia and see how it had advanced.His Thirst For Adventure Hungered him More than without a meal for weeks. perhaps he would fight a shade or 2 or a Renegade Rider ,or perhaps he would change the  tides of war.He could Find Romance or He could find Pain.Maybe when he is done with his journey he will relax and maybe make his own kingdom.He will always strive to be the best rider in the world and beyond. But,what lies ahead is unkown.Then,he and Quicksilver flew off into the sunset to there new adventure.

He is a Dragon Rider. His Dragon's Name is Quicksilver and he is very young.He is Very good with Breathing Fire And flying ,but not as good as Saphira's

[Tismri]

I just have a few notes to make about the setting of the site. It's not exactly a "Dragon Guild." It's more like an academy, with classes and teachers and such, set in the city of New Doru Araeba; like any school, it would likely take students longer than a year to graduate, although in that time he can have obtained his Rider's Sword and be sent on missions, similar to the other students.

Apart from that, it looks good to me. I would prefer a bit more detail in the attitude. "Can be very stubborn" does not tell us much about who he is, what drives him, and what he feels. Also, a bit of effort into correct grammar--particularly in what you capitalize and your consistency with it--would go a long way into making your posts easier for others to read and understand, making your characters more fun to RP with.

Accepted. And welcome to the site. Again, I apologize for taking so long to look at it.